One good blog post I read this week is by Mahdi Taye (803). Mahdi is reading Nineteen Minutes by Jodi Picoult. I especially liked Mahdi’s post because it was focused, he used engaging and articulate vocabulary, and all of his paragraph etiquettes were on point; correct grammar, indented paragraphs, underlining only the title of a book, and everything else. His post read smoothly and was agreeable. Mahdi’s blog post was an inspiring one.
Another good blog post I read this week was Roy Wagner’s (803). He talked about sophisticated topics, used text evidence, and formed a very organized and focused reading response. Roy is reading the Vampire Diaries by L.J. Smith. Although Roy ’s post was awesome, I have some suggestions for him; there are little nuances with writing responses and essays. First off, indent each paragraph-you skipped a line and I’m not sure if that is the correct way to break up paragraphs. Also, remember to underline or italicize book titles (not the author’s name). Besides that, good job.
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